September 11

100WC!!!

I stare out at the Forest. The big bushy leaves and the soft splashes of water. I could just smell the fresh air.A tear fell down my cheek, I missed my family I wish I had never burn down the house. I looked down on my left and saw my little sister I felt so sorry for her to wittiness this she was only 5 she should have a family and not just me, a horrible older brother she smiled and asked me in a sweet voice:

“Are you OK?” I just smiled

So, what lies ahead of us?“she questioned me

“I don’t know.”I whispered.


Posted September 11, 2017 by harguan2016 in category 100WC, homework

4 thoughts on “100WC!!!

  1. Carol (Team 100, Bromley UK)

    You’ve really created a great atmosphere, I felt like I was standing next to you. And it makes for a really interesting piece when you build up to use the prompt words, not using them at the start, well done!

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